Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays in modern life we can share our and live freely. Many place female and male both gander are equally.
Moreover, now people mind is very forward and think positive.Also, person should change their mind with time. Anybody should not think girls status are less compared to men. However, university should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject but, its depend on student choice. Moreover, student to student choice different. Generally male students like account subject compared to female students.
However, university is not decided which student take which subject. Obviously female student choose after ssc. It is not practical to admit equal number of male and female students. The subject that are preferred by male are generally different from girls. For,nursing profession is generally chosen by female and obviously number of female students who study nursing degree is higher than male who study this subject. Conversely, number of male students are generally higher in civil engineering courses in comparison to female students. Suppose, university force to admitting equal male and female students in these course than students strength dramatically too low.
The second, important is that trend create the unbalanced society in the future. The current society is highly balanced by male and female students from different professions. If there is an equal number of student in each subject everyone compete for the same job. As we know, in some type of profession male could be behind compare to female or vice-versa in other profession.
To sum up, university education is important for both gender male and female but equal number of student in every subject is creating imbalance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , nursing
... are generally different from girls. For,nursing profession is generally chosen by femal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, moreover, second, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33211678832 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56724003597 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.561755894193 94% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7668394432 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8947368421 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4210526316 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416183527233 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145258705833 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109400159215 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241906106831 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103078510182 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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