Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The role of capital punishment in diminishing the number of crimes and controlling the criminal actions in society is vitally important in life of human being. I personally agree with the opinion and relating arguments will be discussed below.
First of all, the power of capital penalization in reducing the transgression rate is a greater extent. In fact, the fear of the death penalty refrain people from committing offences. As a result, the safety of individuals could be partly ensured as the offender cannot pose a threat to others.
Secondly, the death penalty is the most reasonable way for punishing the offenders. In particular, there are some offenders who commit serious felonies such as killing innocent citizens or the traitors who betray their country’s secret data to other hostile states. Owing to the death penalties the peace of inhabitants would be enhanced.
Thirdly, the role of death penalty in manipulating the violence is weighty. In other words, without capital penalization criminals could threat to others even though after liberating from prison as they unite with other criminals whom they contact in jail. Therefore, capital punishment could decrease a number of criminal offenders in our society.
Finally, on the other hand, there are some people who argue that the death penalty is not just method and they consider there should be eternal imprisonment for felons instead. As a result, offenders would comprehend underestimating the value of freedom.
In conclusion, having investigated all aspects, it appears to me that capital punishment is the best way for maintaining the security of lives of citizens as well as cutting down the rate of criminal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31365313653 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91157240165 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3434249376 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9285714286 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254357893748 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844641908698 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608631584872 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118688399721 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573084641912 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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