As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology, it helps to reduce human effort and time consumed to do a work.Technology is not something that can be found in nature, it is a product of human intelligence, that implies it improves human ability to think.As statement states relying on technology human ability to think is deteriorating which has no coherence.
Many works which take longer time, more effort does not require thinking,like running or walking. "does anyone use brain while doing this thing?",No one. technology which improved transport facilities is just like replacing our legs with super legs.Technology developed in communication helps us to interact instantly with people over the long distance.So if a message reaches with no matter of time you can start thinking about solution right then.So, relying on technology on some think like this will only reduce time and effort and will never deteriorate human ability to think.
As technology is developed, the human instinct to compete will help to catch up with the latest technology developed which keeps people to think and analyze which in return improves ability to think.
However, there are some technologies like calculators which reduce human effort and time to solve arithmetic equations.But we have to consider the fact that Arithmetic equations are just baby steps to solve problems in maths.So if you have a book full of problems then why should we bother about equations. which in fact never reduce the ability of a human to think.
So finally, the world is full of problems and technology is a way to solve them. The human ability to think and solve problems will never stop even though they rely on technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Technology
...n effort and time consumed to do a work.Technology is not something that can be found in n...
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Suggestion: As
...lies it improves human ability to think.As statement states relying on technology ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lies it improves human ability to think.As statement states relying on technology ...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... human ability to think is deteriorating which has no coherence. Many works w...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , like
...e, more effort does not require thinking,like running or walking. 'does anyone u...
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Suggestion: , No
... use brain while doing this thing?',No one. technology which improved transpor...
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Suggestion: Technology
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...like replacing our legs with super legs.Technology developed in communication helps us to ...
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Suggestion: So
...ntly with people over the long distance.So if a message reaches with no matter of ...
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...ntly with people over the long distance.So if a message reaches with no matter of tim...
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...hes with no matter of time you can start thinking about solution right then.So, r...
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Suggestion: So
...art thinking about solution right then.So, relying on technology on some think li...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: But
... and time to solve arithmetic equations.But we have to consider the fact that Arith...
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Suggestion: So
...t baby steps to solve problems in maths.So if you have a book full of problems the...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...n why should we bother about equations. which in fact never reduce the ability of a h...
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n why should we bother about equations. which in fact never reduce the ability of a h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18014705882 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89966803598 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.349464439 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.555555556 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320042803313 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145923931492 0.0831039109588 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849003240963 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20371093376 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449112095333 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.