International travel is extremely popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Include your opinion and examples from your own experience.
The whole world is turning to a global village in this jet age of 21st century. Therefore, boundaries between nations are no longer of that importance. Presently, travelling to other nations for education, business and work has been the order of the day. As a result, a massive rise could be seen in the number of international flights. Here, i would like to account for benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
There are multifarious advantages of this phenomena. First and foremost, international travels help to bridge the cultural gaps worldwide. To illustrate, people of different cultures get o...
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Sentence: There are multifarious advantages of this phenomena.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and phenomena
flaws:
Don't forget 'pollution', 'terrorism' as the disadvantages of International travels.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1875 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.597 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.148 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.958 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.267 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.251 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.034 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
. The whole world is turning to a glob...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... number of international flights. Here, i would like to account for benefits and ...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... There are multifarious advantages of this phenomena. First and foremost, internat...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... indigenous people. Hence, international visits eliminate cultural barriers and p...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the best out of international visits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80597014925 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25743605745 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9901604234 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0416666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9583333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138432093072 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387471249375 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318765726516 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07424023496 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237180064615 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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