The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?
Information is an important aspect in human’s life. The presence of technology and Internet has widened the access to information for people in present days. For example, people current generations can simply use their mobile phones to browse the up-to-date information, compared to people in the past who used newspaper. The rising access to information has obviously influenced several important aspects in human’s life.
Wide access to information has helped the business and economic sector in several ways. Companies and business owners now can have their websites to market their products or services to customers. This phenomenon has helped them to attract more visitors to their products at relatively lower marketing cost. Internet availability has also improved the customer relationship management between companies and customers. Using free call service or corporate mail, customers can communicate directly with companies’ representative.
Internet is also helpful in helping people to promote information that is related to humanities or interest of many people. There are many volunteers or non-profit organizations that use the Internet to promote their social activities in order to collect donations from donors. Other than that, Internet can also help disseminate powerful information that is happening in the world. For example, government can use Internet to warn people about the widespread of dangerous disease.
Without smart and wise utilization however, Internet can threat privacy and security of human’s life. Nowadays, people can use Internet to make financial transactions. Some people can see this as an opportunity to arrange a conduct a cyber crime activity. The open era of information has also threatened the privacy of personal information. With more people regularly input their personal data online, this data can also be used for criminal activity.
In conclusion, Internet must be used appropriately and wisely in order to bring many advantages for people in their daily life. The utilization of Internet with bad intention will harm the interest of many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69905956113 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04679295294 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6707823143 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292086123745 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100963986106 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573133196279 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171125139982 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692383750799 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 58.1214874552 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.