Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree?
It is accepted that offenders or murderers are legitimately sentenced to prison in an given amount of time in most countries. However, I personally think that education will be a better alternative solution to solve crimes due to some following reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that prison is a beneficial way to defer prisoners from committing criminals since they are locked away and then they do not have chance to reoffend. Additionally, time spent in prison helps them reflect themselves and their offended behaviours. They probably can realize their faults and long to change for the better. However, there are also drawbacks when incarcerating people. Surrounded by aggressive and cruel inmates will influence other’s characters and consequently there is a likelihood that these people will be re-convicted after being released. Besides, once someone is placed in prison with poor accommodations, he or she cannot receive enough support from society and family to rehabilitate his or her criminals.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that a better education, an alternative solution apart from incarcerating people, seems to be more effective. According to a research in Hanoi University, people with insufficient education are more likely to commit crime compared to those with poor academic performance. Therefore, to reduce the amount of criminals, it is better to educate people, especially youngsters, sufficiently and appropriately. For prisoners, education brings them proper, accessible opportunities as well as the love and support from society and their family in order to change their character and eventually become better themselves after being released.
In conclusion, education will soon become a more effective solution to reduce crimes apart from placing people in prison.
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...are legitimately sentenced to prison in an given amount of time in most countries....
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...eems to be more effective. According to a research in Hanoi University, people with insuff...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd support from society and their family in order to change their character and e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57913669065 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12294236383 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1431647699 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243473046826 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830890033784 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614848321727 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166929689154 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397297177891 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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