Today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. Discuss the causes of rising unemployment among young adults and suggest solutions
It is true that there is a rapidly increasing proportion of unemployment among graduates. This essay bellow will discuss the reasons and some possible measures that universities and individuals can take to address these problems.
There are a number of factors which can be considered as the major causes of this phenomenon. The main reason is that university leavers do not meet the labour market’s needs. That can be seen by the fact that the subjects taught at schools tend to be more theoretical rather than practical while employers are likely to choose suitable candidates possessing hands - on experience and skills that are useful in workplaces. In consequence, students lacking necessary these factors may fail to find jobs. The other major reason may be from graduates’ perspectives. Students in Vietnam, for example, always hold an incomprehensive view of labour market, and as a result they only send application forms to positions which offer high salary and fast promotion.By doing this, it will prevent them from joining workforce immediately.
There are several actions that universities and students can take to reduce the unemployment rate. I think the most obvious solution for academic institutions is adjusting curricula and subjects that response the needs of employers. For instance, there may be more extra programs such as arranging visits to companies and factories, which means that students have more opportunities to observe and gain real experience and skills. A further step could be that students should rise their awareness of market’s demand so that they would choose appropriate professions that are in need.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise to the increase in the rate of joblessness among the youth
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Suggestion: By
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38111888112 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0185358968 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.575661833 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122826697758 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428219076093 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280723503007 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675881571975 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201144438669 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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