A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear John,
I hope you had a good journey. I knew that you were expected to come in the morning by American airlines and going to stay with me at my house. I will be back to home by 7 pm in the evening.
Firstly, I have planned all the things for you. I have prepared the barbeque and along with that a surprise is waiting for you. you can easily find it in the cabinet. I have hired a permanent maid who will cook meal all three times a day until you are here so that you wont run into any issues in Kitchen. I have placed the keys under the shoe stack rug which you will find beside the door.
Secondly, You can get down at NY airport and take a blue line metro station bound to Manchester Avenue Street. You need to alight from the metro station at the last stop and take a cab and ask him to drop you at the 18th Manchester Avenue Street. From there walk few miles and locate a green building with only one floor; that is the house.
Thirdly, I will be back at the home by the evening 9 pm and may be we can go out together for dining and then a movie
Many Thanks
Faizal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and going to stay with me at my house. I will be back to home by 7 pm in the eve...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'pm'.
Suggestion: pm
...t my house. I will be back to home by 7 pm in the evening. Firstly, I have planned all the thi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ith that a surprise is waiting for you. you can easily find it in the cabinet. I ha...
^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... take a blue line metro station bound to Manchester Avenue Street. You need to al...
^^
Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...ack at the home by the evening 9 pm and may be we can go out together for dining and t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01376146789 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97152206452 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0932570991 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9166666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334935448986 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129001202815 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541601375196 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190030821094 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840835515228 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.