The number of parcels
The diagram given illustrates the number of parcels delivered by two major mail service companies from 1920 to 2000. This diagram includes two lines which show the statistics about these two companies.
The white line shows us about the number of goods delivered by TNT Mail Service. It is observed that in 1920, the number of parcels stood at 5000 packages and rose steadily to reach about 8000 after 30 years. This was followed by another increase which came up to 12000 in 1960. However, after 20 years, it declined steadily before increasing slowly in 1980. There witnessed a rapid increase in the total number of packs from 11000 to 22000 in 1990. After reaching a high point at 1990, postal parcels reached a peak at 25000 at the first year of 21th century.
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...es and rose steadily to reach about 8000 after 30 years. This was followed by ano...
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... another increase which came up to 12000 in 1960. However, after 20 years, it dec...
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... in the total number of packs from 11000 to 22000 in 1990. After reaching a hig...
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...tal number of packs from 11000 to 22000 in 1990. After reaching a high point at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 635.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73880597015 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27651085452 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3354434912 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.375 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268802531337 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110376166435 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105371435295 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205582999604 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304549134106 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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