the three maps shows changes in the village of Kelsbey from 1780 to 2000.
The maps indicates several changes in the village of Kelsbey in the years 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall, this village has become a much more residential area with modern infrastructure as a replacement for a sharp decrease of the areas for forest and agriculture.
In 1780, there were considerably larger areas for four farmlands and woods as opposed to only 100 housing units located in the North. After 80 years, a main road and a bridge were built accross the river as the increase in the number of homes to 200 homes. The area for agricultural purpose was declined exactly a half of that in 1780, to just 2 farmlands together with a plummet in the space for woods.
In 2000, the number of homes continued rising by over a half of that in 1860 to 500 units. Another road had also been erected so as to connect residential land with 2 schools and 3 sports fields in the southern area. There were also five local shops built on the riverbank, next to the wetland for birds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'indicate'.
Suggestion: indicate
The maps indicates several changes in the village of Kelsb...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...its. Another road had also been erected so as to connect residential land with 2 schools...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56497175141 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51352116171 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6783503051 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147874058736 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804128535395 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14726469559 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14383930426 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186088509795 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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