It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. They are less distracted and this leads to better results.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education has a major role in societies: to form and prepare future generations of modern citizens.
The quality of education, I think, will reflect the quality of future society.
Therefore it is my firm conviction that we should research as many tools as possible in order to improve educational standards.
In that direction goes the reflection on mixed sex classes, whether they represent an obstacle to youth learning or not. In my opinion it is better for students to study in separate classes or, even better, in separate schools.
Let me explain why: not to overload a mind, especially adolescents, should be a major goal; it will allows students to focus on their studies, thing that will leads not only to better results, but to better personalities too.
In separate schools youth students would have the opportunity to develop a stronger sense of belonging to their school and to their group of friends. A good example of this can be found in the Anglo-Saxon world, England and U.S. for instance, where in high schools and colleges students develop a strong feel of membership with their schools.
Being inside a group of guys only or girls only it would be more easy for individuals to share their problems with others and though, it would be easier for them to come through difficult periods of their lives.
Not that in mixed classes this could not happens, but it is more likely for the “weakest” and most introverted ones to be left alone.
All these things considered I strongly agree with those wishing boys and girls to study separately.
I also want to point out that keeping separate the study world to the rest of social life (and separate sex schools are a splendid way of doing so) would be beneficial for students not only because it allows them to focus on study, but also because it encourages them to take study, and work afterwards, more seriously, teaching them that discipline and passion will pay out only with the right amount of efforts.
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Sentence: Let me explain why: not to overload a mind, especially adolescents, should be a major goal; it will allows students to focus on their studies, thing that will leads not only to better results, but to better personalities too.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to will and allows
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to will and leads
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para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion: because of reasons 1,2,3, so i choose A/B or agree/disagree.
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