some people think that tecnnology is making new relationships. discuss advantages and dis advantages
With the advent of technology , social interaction of human has been changed drastically. with the advancement of computers and internet social values has been changed. on the one hand many believe this is a great achievement for establishing relationship while others believe that it has worse out come. This essay will discuss both aspects of this argument.
It is felt that with advancement of technology world has become smaller. Now it is very convenient for people to make friendships on internet. It has a lot of advantages . Firstly , this way someone have a lot of exposure to world. It is beneficial for one to learn about different cultures with no expense. With friends from different culture can exchange their ideas and give them a lot of knowledge. secondly, this link on internet is very beneficial for students. For instance there are many study groups which help each other . It is a great resource of sharing study material. Same way there some professional groups which help to find appropriate jobs. Thirdly, sometimes people find good friends on face book and with time this turns to a strong relationship. This way there is diversity which is always better for society. It is easy to say why argument has a lot of support.
At the same time some people feel that these internet created relationships have a lot of negative impacts. They validate their views with some solid reasons. For instance, sometimes these relationships destroy privacy of each other. Every one knows others status which can cause problems. Similarly due to this source of communication there is less tourism and this effects country,s economy. It is seen that there are a lot of fraud cases due to this relationship. Sometimes there are some criminal activities can happen. So it is very important to make friends who you know personally. So it is important not to make relationships on computers.
In summary , new technology is an asset. It has pros and cons. It is recommended that if we use it for the improvement of life style, it is a blessing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in summary, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95375722543 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85868440464 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523121387283 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0854602111 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1034482759 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9310344828 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.79310344828 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970172297389 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029957805227 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051934033896 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526332515342 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254259993358 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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