Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Things has not been changed and they remain still the same for criminals. Many criminals get engaged in more crime activities once they walk free in open air after serving the first punishment. There are mainly two reasons to this which will be discussed in this essay, among suggested possible measures to tackle this problem.
Firstly, It has been alleged that criminals go through a hard time during their stay at jail. They are often being tortured and traumatized by jailor and warden who often take them to remand room without any approved legal notice by beating the hell out of them just for fun sake. In addition, if a criminal doesn't get along very well with the main head person in the prison then his chance to survive in prison starts becoming bleaked.
Secondly, There are not many rehabilitation center for criminals and the few ones left belong to rich criminals without a shadow of doubt because of the corrupted police officers. For example in jails, prisoners with money can buy cigarettes and even girl as well just for the entertainment.
Finally, Government, should make some reduction out of public funds to open rehabilitation centers, capture prisoners interest in databank and run personalized programs. These programs cater to the particular topics based o the prisoner's interest. Furthermore, Criminals can be involved in community voluntary work aimed towards reducing their years of sentence based on the performance.
In conclusion, it is true that criminals are one of the biggest problem of the economy but it can be changed by putting them into rehabilitation and community voluntary work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...or fun sake. In addition, if a criminal doesnt get along very well with the main head ...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun rehabilitation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much rehabilitation', 'a good deal of rehabilitation'.
Suggestion: much rehabilitation; a good deal of rehabilitation
...ing bleaked. Secondly, There are not many rehabilitation center for criminals and the few ones l...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...ndly, There are not many rehabilitation center for criminals and the few ones left bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17228464419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72784677048 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1073046366 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183516778911 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607854027674 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928680805191 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10323179559 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126296479287 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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