Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them.in return for the millions of dollars that they are paidwe should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibilty.-write a response in whi
Every individual in a society has a role model, someone the person looks upto, revers and follows.
Today, the world of sports and movies has captured our minds. Sports and movie stars are individuals that have captured our imagination. We often relate to them and look up to them for courage, ideas, support , a mental satisfaction that runs through our minds- 'YES!, if he can, so can I'.
These role models have become a part of our lives. Their life of struggle, hard work, rising from the abyss to touching the sky, their stories of hardwork and success have inspired one and all.Sports and mo...
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Sentence: Insipite of achieving so much fame and success, he maintains a modest atitude and shells out time to meet his fans, support the poor financially through various charitable trusts.
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Sentence: They have to payback their debt to the society for the support they have recieved during their successful careers.
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