When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and ways of life die out It is pointless to try and keep them alive To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A country’s development in technology influences on the traditional style of life very significantly. Looking at those countries which have high technologies, we can easily notice the consequence of developing it and the state of the traditional life. I think Technology is the reason for disappearing traditional skills and ways of life. However, I do not consider it is pointless trying to keep them alive.

Technology is the sphere which is developing very fast. Also, it aids to make life easier and more convenient. Therefore, nowadays all countries are paying more attention to the develop...

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