There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
“Music is the magic” said the king of rap Eminem in his song. I totally agree with him, because music helps you to have pleasure even in the worst moments. Of course, if the music is your favourite. Different types of music are heard by different people according to their interest. In my opinion we cannot say a type of music is important, the most important thing is to have pleasure and enjoy when we listen to music.
Music is pleasant sound which aids your mind to relax and enjoy. Your mood will be good when you hear music. According to me, when I am exhausted or angry, listening to my favourite music is the best way to turn my mood good. When you hear music you forget your problems and boring activities of your life for several seconds and your nerves relaxes.
Today the most popular types of music are Pop, Rock, Jazz, Rap, Classic and et cetera. It does not matter what kinds of music there are in the world, all of them are heard and enjoyed by millions of people. Nowadays, the most popular ones among the young are Rap and Rock. Some old people say how do we relax to hear rock music? They think that it is too fast and difficult to understand. Even though, there are majority of people who enjoy rock music.
Sometimes happens, when you are going to listen to music with your grandparents, they ask you to play that traditional-classic music. However, most young do not like traditional music. It does not mean that they are unimportant. It has also special listeners who enjoy it.
In brief, I think both international and traditional music are the same important. We, the young cannot imagine parties or celebrations without international music. However, at the same time we also hear our traditional music.
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