Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our enviroment. What causes global warming?
Nowadays, mankind is facing with an important issue that is named global warming. Our athmosphere is in danger in theese days. The air that takes one of the biggest part for all living beings, are getting warmer day by day. All developed countries and their sollution programs share the same idea which is global warming is unexcapeably end for our blue marble. Despite the fact that what can we do to reduce our airs warming trend? What causes global warming? There is no one specific answer for this questions. Literally there are hundreds of causes that makes our air warmer every day.
Automobiles, factories, industrial facilities and lots of examples like these cause global warming. In fact global warming is literally man made problem. The main result from our development especially industriel sectors take a big part of the biggest problem that threats to extinct our species. Gasses coming from factories, automobiles, planes, ships hold the heat in the air and do not let the athmosphere get cooled. It damages ozone layer and causes the athmosphere warmer. Briefly dangerous gasses coming from our industrial or daily used facilities cause global warming and we are facing that important issue. Also using fossil fuel have a big part of global warming. When we burn these kind of fuels , these fuels product carbon monoxide and we know that is the main cause of global warming.
Finally, lots of gasses from fuels factories daily things make our air warmer every day. Every hour tonnes of dangerous gasses are being reliesed from somewhere in the world. We must get some precautions before that will be loo late. We have responsibility over our grandchildren. We have to legate our children more liveable world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, finally, if, so, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01393728223 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53510984479 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0334635909 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5238095238 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374504266567 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122926847828 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142259417536 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245180019708 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143413105259 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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