Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there for this problem?
it is true that global warming is one of the most pressing problems for many nations since it poses a serious threat to our environment. In this essay, I will outline some primary causes of this problem and suggest several possible solutions.
There are two main reasons for the heating up of the earth's atmosphere. The first reason is the excessive consumption of fossil fuels. In this day and age, a large amount of fossil fuels is burned to power factories, run cars and produce electricity. When fossil fuels burn, they let carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. As a result, the heightened level of carbon dioxide will causes global temperatures to rise. In other words, the exhaust fumes and emissions stem from factories, human activities and vehicles are major factors in the rise of carbon dioxide which result in global warming. Another reason is that many forests are cut down to pave the way for the massive construction of factories. given the fact that trees use carbon dioxide to they make their own food, fewer trees mean that less carbon dioxide is taken out of the atmosphere.
Fortunately, there are several measures could be implemented to mitigate the problems arising from global warming. Firstly, the government should encourage power stations and plants to use more environmentally-friendly sources of energy such as renewable energies instead of fossil fuels. Secondly, raising social awareness of environmental protection should be given priority. For instance, If schools could offer more natural courses to their students, these courses would provide students with a profound understanding of the consequences of global warming and help them realize the importance of protecting the environment. Additionally, television programs could be used to incentivize people to participate in environmental protection campaigns such as planting more trees and driving zero-emission vehicles.
In conclusion, the main cause of global warming is the acceleration in the use of fossil fuels. Therefore, several measures, as listed above, should be taken immediately to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: earths'; earth's
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
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Suggestion: Given
... the massive construction of factories. given the fact that trees use carbon dioxide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38484848485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02919525206 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4975653083 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.529411765 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259476360402 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816378586652 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938235972326 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195669889315 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11437648764 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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