The graphs show the types of music albums purchased by people according to sex and age.
The graphs illustrate the percentage of people who bought three types of music albums: rock, pop and classical music albums according to their gender and age.
First of all, in order to enlighten the effect of age factor we can show that the biggest proportion of people who buy rock and pop music albums are young people at the age of 25 to 34, since over 30% of them buy pop albums and the same amount purchase rock albums. However, classical music albums graph indicates that most classical music lovers are old people who are over 45 as 20% of them buy this type of albums.
Secondly, it’s possible to show the role of gender factor in music taste, at this point according to the given figures the percentage of men that buy pop, rock and classical music albums are respectively 27%, 26% and 9% albeit the same indicators for females are 15%, 16% and 6%.
Taking all that information into account, it is possible to say that, people who belong to different age and sex groups have different music tastes.
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