Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
There is no doubt that fashion has become a mainstream in today's modern world. In this essay, I will discuss some of the causes associated with wearing fashionable clothes and effects of it on human beings.
One problem which is very common among the people is that, they all want to be a part of fashion in the every activity of their life. This is because every human being wants to portray himself as a good looking person in front of others, by choosing to wear designer's clothes. For example, in the city where I live, people wear Armani suits irrespective of whatever the function is. Furthermore, this has become a trend especially in the upper-middle class of the society. As a result of it, people in upper-intermediate class has to always maintain a level of dressing style in the society they live
However, I strongly believe that wearing branded clothes is actually a great thing. The reason for this is that it helps to improve the overall personality of a person. For example, It is believed that when you wear newly-design clothes, then you actually embody that feeling in your overall behavior. In addition to this, it gives a boost to the confidence and the behavior of a person.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that putting on a designer clothes on the human body will do more benefits in the belief and character of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72151898734 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7315388114 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6383956685 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255969381714 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085828347762 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371543231735 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127390511039 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602734876641 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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