Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?
A respective military ranking agency from the USA has recently published that Russia alone has enough nuclear missiles to turn the Earth into ash. Therefore, the nuclear technology can be considered the greatest threat to mankind since there is a significant number of antagonist countries possesses such technology. Nevertheless, the technology is used by many developed countries in such peaceful ways as industrial and medicine bringing substantial benefits.
The nuclear technology can be a solution to the ever increasing ecological problem in form of air pollution. Since the beginning of the industrial revolution in Europe, the whole planet actively used combustion fuel, coal, to produce one of the essential resources - electricity - to meet the increasing demand, resulting in heavy air contamination. However, later, scientists discovered that splitting of uranium atoms can generate energy magnitude of which immense. Thus, the developed countries the conventional way of producing electricity in favor of nuclear plants. Moreover, the plants are substantially environment-friendly unless the plants are severely damaged like Fukushima in Japan by the earthquake in 2011, which resulted in leak of hazardous nuclear substances.
The technology also is being massively engaged in medical sphere. American Medical Association (AMA) has discovered how to cure different types of cancer, which has considered to be incurable for many years, by the nuclear technology. More precisely, the doctors strike damaged cells of a patient with ions saturated with uranium. The association, in addition, affirms that the discovery is only the top of the iceberg since the technology has many prospects in medicine, according to AMA.
The nuclear technology can bear many benefits. Thus, it is imperative that the technology is conducted in a peaceful way; otherwise, it is capable of destroying the whole planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a peaceful way" with adverb for "peaceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rative that the technology is conducted in a peaceful way; otherwise, it is capable of destroying...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67944250871 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18921161867 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2041241496 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200592778761 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715811827056 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510011685913 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123699609129 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142356291787 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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