Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while other think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people in our society think art is a waste of time and it would not buy them bread and butter for living. Other thinks that its plays vital role in our society, It make human to think beyond imagination. In my opinioun, art is a compelling medium to express imagination and creativity.
As from the other side of the coin, People who think that its waste of money and time have their own arguments. They think that it would not buy them luxuries of life. There are many examples, where art and artist are taking funds from goverment organization to pass their life and their life mostly spend in darkness.
However, As i see the art, Its most facinating thing happen to humans from the beggining of time, because it make us immaginable, We start to think differently, thats the main reason how human survive from the time to time. I think art has to be a mandatary subject in schools and collages, So our childern build up their creativity and immagination. They will be doctors,scientist or may be engineer but if the did not have creativity and immagination they will not become successful in life.
The bottom line is, Art is a important subject for childern and its play vital role in the creativity and immagination of childern. Its Art which connects our past with future and major of everything it makes us human. There were old saying without the art there is no human and without a human their will be no life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6015625 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64223092809 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9989837272 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1666666667 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242669415445 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100561484806 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838804822666 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161535429107 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720843757021 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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