Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter,
- tell him/her about your flat.
- give him/her some instructions about his/ her stay.
- tell him/ her what to do incase of problems.
Dear Kinjal,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in order to give you some information and quick tips for your comfortable stay at my home in my absence.
As I had informed you, I am out of town for a week to attend some social event at my native. During this period, you can move to my flat which is located in a suburb of Ahmedabad city called Gota. My flat is one BHK flat on the fourth floor of K block which is the only ten storey building in this development. You will find all the modern amenities like gym, garden and swimming pool for the recreation of all the residents there. Moreover, we have two more families residing on the same floor who are very cooperative and helping in their nature. Moreover, as I am living here on a rental basis, there are certain guidelines we need to adhere during our stay. Firstly, you have to park your vehicle in allocated parking only. Secondly, you should not create loud noises which can disturb families residing nearby. Finally, Alchohol, smoke, and parties are strictly prohibited here. So, I would request you to maintain the decorum set by the authorities.
At last, If you face any emergency, you can contact the security deputed at the gate of the society. You can call them through intercom dialing 1000 or else you can take help of the chairman of the society connecting him through his mobile number written in the telephone diary.
I wish you will enjoy your stay at my home during your mini vacation. Hope to see ou soon once I return from my trip.
Warm regards
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ooperative and helping in their nature. Moreover, as I am living here on a rental basis,...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rum set by the authorities. At last, If you face any emergency, you can conta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5390070922 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37443588614 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0435075727 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2941176471 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178100181766 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526306989536 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594555724699 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130942006363 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473656857618 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.