Some people think that in the future lots of changes will occur that will
improve our society.
Do you agree or disagree?
What kind of changes will occur?
As a result of developments that are taking place, many people believe that life
will become better. This essay discusses the reasons why the changes that are
coming are positive, and also suggests what kind of changes will occur.
The changes that are coming are positive for two main reasons. The main
reason is that they will make our lives more convenient. We are likely to have
more free time as a result of technology taking over many of our everyday
tasks. For example, we may have robots capable of doing many household
chores, and this will enable us to have more free time for enjoyment and
relaxation. Another factor is that our recreational time will be enhanced by new
technologies that make our entertainment and even more fun. If we enjoy
ourselves more we will be happier and more relaxed.
There are two main types of developments that are likely to occur. The first of
these is time-saving technologies. Future enhancements of robotics are likely to
lead to even more household tasks being performed by machines. As well as
this, the entertainment industry looks likely to soon make enhancements to our
recreational experiences by making new technologies available. A good
example of this is 3-D television, which will make watching movies even more
fun.
In conclusion, the future looks promising because we will have technology
takeover many of life's mundane tasks and we'll have better forms of
entertainment. The most likely changes appear to be technologies to save us
time and also enhance our leisure time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 26, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Entertainment
... tasks and well have better forms of entertainment. The most likely changes appear to be t...
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Line 28, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
...appear to be technologies to save us time and also enhance our leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15564202335 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79050457349 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490272373541 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3550876427 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214090320591 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811016238072 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712653714433 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708272628948 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755380364677 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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