Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to question whether teacher were more respected by society rather than now, everybody has its own perspective depends on his/her experiences, observations, etc. From my viewpoint, given societies has been changed by several factors, teacher has not their previous appreciation among people. I will detail my reasoning as follows.
First, the most critical reason is teachers' salary. In past, teachers' wage were equal or higher than average income of other society members which enabled them to have a good life condition. But now, as other jobs' income like engineers, traders, and typical employees increased significantly, teachers' wage level did not changed as others. This comes important when we see that people usually judge and appreciate others based on their financial situation. Therefore, given that teaching has stood as one jobs with the lowest payment in the society, they are not as appreciated as past.
Second, teachers' social position among people has weakened. In past, people respected teachers because many of society members were illiterate. They considered teachers as individuals who were knowledgeable and worthy to respect. However, by conducting several programs to decrease illiteracy rate, many people can read and write and some of them have higher scientific and executive positions in comparison to teachers. I past, for example, teachers could be hired when they graduated from bachelor which many people were unable to got such degree, so, many people eager to be a teacher. Nevertheless, universities are full of graduate and postgraduate students who are more inclined to receive prestigious job positions with higher social positions.
Third and last, as a counterargument, some people may think that teachers are appreciated by others due to the fact that they help in development of our children. On the contrary, I know many persons that prefer to teach their children by themselves not by sending them to schools. They believe that schools are not good place for children because our educational system is not efficient and we hear about students that do a lot of crimes like drug abusing, using gun in schools, etc. So, as schools are not appreciated by parents, consequently, teachers will not be valued by society as a member and employee of schools.
In all, despite the fact that teachers are valued and respected by society, as a parent I feel that their position in society is in danger. I believe that governments should rehabilitate teachers' social image in society. If they don't do that, our society would experience a serious educational and ethical problem in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In the past
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Suggestion: change
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Suggestion: In the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, for example, i feel, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26713947991 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84291517099 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534278959811 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.351001543 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.095238095 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255161812525 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795725262822 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051889044236 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14417368223 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278492418636 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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