Some people believe it is better for children to grow up for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better grow up in the countryside. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is widely held believe that urban area is suitable to rear kids, but there are strong counter sceptic arguments amongst section of people who prefer villages and suburbs for infants. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
First and foremost, in the modern era, cities have more facilitates and and state-of-the-art centers for children where they are able to develop their opportunity. This can be illustrated by the example of that teenager who prefer to be athlete is able to go sport centers with modern equipments and professional coaches.
Also theatre, library, museum, hi-tech center in the city is able to enlighten new generation with latest and tremendous knowledge. Juveniles have chance read all newest books, acquire catting-edge technology aspects, research with huge database in the library archive.
One the other hand, rural area has its own benefits for offspring, for instance, countrysides and villages are independent from pollution and car waste emission. This advantages provide to rural children maintain healthy lifestyle. Moreover infants who settle in villages consume hardly ever junk foods since there no fast food cafes. As a result number of children who suffer obesity is low. This benefits rise up chance maintain calorie balance and body mass index.
in conclusion, from my vintage point children should live in the city since it provide perfect chance to be educative pupil and high quality employee in the future. Moreover parents should follow their offsprings safety and healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...odern era, cities have more facilitates and and state-of-the-art centers for children w...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...quipments and professional coaches. Also theatre, library, museum, hi-tech cente...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...al children maintain healthy lifestyle. Moreover infants who settle in villages consume ...
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Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'consume'.
Suggestion: hardly consume
...Moreover infants who settle in villages consume hardly ever junk foods since there no fast foo...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k foods since there no fast food cafes. As a result number of children who suffer ...
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Suggestion: In
...alorie balance and body mass index. in conclusion, from my vintage point child...
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Message: Did you mean 'vantage point'?
Suggestion: vantage point
... mass index. in conclusion, from my vintage point children should live in the city since ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...nd high quality employee in the future. Moreover parents should follow their offsprings ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35019455253 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6559776587 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657587548638 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3391228369 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132190377196 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426362798255 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369136834707 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615835090552 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380766759921 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.