Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Both the lecturer and the reading passage are talking about the important influence of the young people that determine the future society. Some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons of their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that, young people today have great influence. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraphs:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the young people decisions have great impact on the whole future society because of the rapid development in the technology. The rapid development technology makes the world as a small city. So, the young people can see and know what happen in the world. Eventually, those young people will effect by each other and trying to develop their community in different ways.
Another reason why I advocate that the influence of the young people today is important is the rapid life that we live in it. Today the life is very tough so, the young people trying to improve themselves in different way in order to reach their goals. If the young people depend on themselves during their early life stage, they will be very strong person in future. And eventually, they will have brilliant future which help the whole society.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that today there are many organizations for the young people. Many young people attend in such organization and that help them to learn how to be a good leader in the future. Additionally, such organizations give the encourage the young people to help their communities. So, they get a chance to take a part in their country development and prosperity.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people how hople the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ld. Eventually, those young people will effect by each other and trying to develop the...
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Line 6, column 358, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... stage, they will be very strong person in future. And eventually, they will have brillia...
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Line 8, column 253, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... Additionally, such organizations give the encourage the young people to help their communit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, talking about, first of all, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95362318841 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58436967241 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501449275362 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.737729093 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9444444444 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283955396489 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931889561823 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582409894511 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149370257477 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812803689819 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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