Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Multinational companies are growing very fast. The whole world is now the target market of many products. Nowadays we can easily find a specific brand of toothpaste or any other products in nearly every country, as we are living in a global village.
In one hand this phenomenon is very positive. People can have various products with higher quality comparing to local ones. As some countries may not have strong productive industries, their choice would have been limited to local products in the other way.
It also benefits the companies, as they can aim for an international market which results to higher profit. Besides, that some products require further services and support, would lead to establishment of international branches of companies which bring job opportunities in those countries.
In another hand, as some products may not suit one's culture, he may find his culture influenced by others. Even though it cannot happen to some daily use products, it may still affect any individual. For example, I as one can mention cola drinks as they are well known in my culture and they are now more popular than our traditional drink known as Persian doogh.
Every phenomenon has got its positive and negative points. We are living in 21st century we are all living together as a family in an international village. Therefore, we cannot stop becoming similar to one another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...her hand, as some products may not suit ones culture, he may find his culture influe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03913043478 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75286068772 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6476427083 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7857142857 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114930048701 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377795623708 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312293189413 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056557368816 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309614578655 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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