Some people prefer to spend their live doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's non-stop driven world, a burgeoning number of people are concerning about changing throughout entire life. In this regard, whether citizens should remain plateau in life is a highly debated issue. While many believe to maintain life in the same route, I am, however, of the opposite idea.
It is irrefutable that getting away from changes brings to each individual more harm than good. Firstly, those who remain life unchanged would block themselves in a safety zone, which prevents people from having a try on something brand new and finding themselves updated. Secondly, as a consequence, this leads to ability limitation. Lacking of differences, not only pulls human far from creativity but also makes us being passive and reserved. To illustrate, one was given a chance in a while to join in a mountain climbing trip. Provided that he had agreed, he could have widened his knowledge as well as networked. Accordingly, it is essential to have something changed in certain life stages.
In addition, a nation even the global village would suffer from poverty or fogginess when denying changes. Like butterfly effect, once one refuses changing, it triggers losing pace for the whole community. That is to say, the more nations are behind the time, the slower the pace of globalization gets. It obvious affects severely to development of human race.
Despite its positive contribution, changing, to somewhat, is not that good. Particularly, a country immersing in changing in order to keep pace with others would probably lose cultural identity, raising concern about world's cultural diversity. Thus, avoiding changes would be more beneficial than posing threats.
In conclusion, with a view to a betterment, changing is of course indispensable. Both individuals and nations should change to adapt new environments. but making changes appropriately in modern time is highly recommended notwithstanding . By doing so, we still reserve the value to its origin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...en world, a burgeoning number of people are concerning about changing throughout entire life. ...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...hould change to adapt new environments. but making changes appropriately in modern ...
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Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me is highly recommended notwithstanding . By doing so, we still reserve the value...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32587859425 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92589204403 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667731629393 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3276887923 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.380952381 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9047619048 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976742741344 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027429868847 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027822896155 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540499166223 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348891611469 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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