Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.Others,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for commiting it,should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
It has long been questioned whether there should be fixed penalty for each crime or reason of committing crime and its circumstances must be considered. In following I will discuss both ideas and furnish my own view.
First of all about the idea of fixed punishment, some people claim that fixed punishment is a necessity and is a preventing measure. In addition, they believe that if everyone knows that for each crime there will be a fixed and confirmed punishment and they cannot escape from its consequences, it may stop them to committing that crime. As a result, by this way the rate of crim...
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Sentence: For instance, we all have heard the story of Les miserables, in this outstanding novel there is a character named Jean Valjean who condemned to life time prison due to stealing.
Error: miserables Suggestion: miserable
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