Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
Globalization is leading this world to an another stage. It undoubtedly has made positive impact globally but at the same time it has some worse effects. Both the views will be discussed.
First of all globalization has introduced international trade between the various countries all over the world. Many companies have successfully increased their profits. Many countries' GDP has grown substantially for instance, China is now leading in upfront with the highest GDP rate comparing to the other developed countries.
On the other hand, the negative effects should not be forgotten. If globalization has brought the free trade and modernization then it has also brought unemployment in many countries. Companies tend to fire more employees in a way of cost cutting and boosting their revenues and profits. In addition to that skilled workers are highly paid comparing to semi-skilled workers. For example, China has the biggest labor market causing the cheapest labor. Indeed, China has outweigh other countries in GDP but cheapest labor may compromise the standard of living.
In the end, globalization is still remain a big question mark on the economic stability and peoples' standard of living. If globalization has brought the applauding changes in the modern world then on the other hand it has also brought poverty and misery in developing countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a stage' or 'another stage'.
Suggestion: a stage; another stage
Globalization is leading this world to an another stage. It undoubtedly has made positive impac...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...g the cheapest labor. Indeed, China has outweigh other countries in GDP but cheapest lab...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
.... In the end, globalization is still remain a big question mark on the economic sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35813953488 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97379941552 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6073398762 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2857142857 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140872405861 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512125362622 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603202059447 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086079987584 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374982454098 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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