The line graph : Students studying languages in Canada
The line graph gives information about the amount of students learning three languages in Canada during the period from 2010 to 2020.There are French, German and Arabic
In 2010, the number of students studying French was the highest.German was the second and Arabic was the least one.There will have no change in 2020
In the first year, the most popular language that Canadian students learning was French, which being learned by more than 5000.Afterwards, it stayed the same for the next two years.Finally, it will grow rapidly and reach about 5500.By contrast, between 2010 to 2012, students who studied Arabic fell slightly to 4500.Then, it fluctuated till 2017.In the last years of the period, there will be no change at 4500 students
Futhermore, there were around 4950 people studying German in 2010.Next, it is going down steadily till 2020.Ultimately, it will finish at around 4700 students
It is clear that more Canadian students study French than German and Arabic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72593446759 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 159.0 22.4926829268 707% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 831.0 112.824112599 737% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 159.0 22.9334400587 693% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 5.23603664747 535% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288534543778 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288534543778 0.103423049105 279% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162629095143 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083941884145 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 82.7 13.2329268293 625% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -72.99 61.2550243902 -119% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 62.9 10.3012195122 611% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.91 8.06136585366 173% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 65.6 10.9970731707 597% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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