Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
People have always been making various opportunities for handling their life in smart way because they are alluring to experience different ways for making better foundation. Travel is a unique way that can give us the power to gain more knowledge and experience. It helps us to get familiar with different cultures, foods, people and places. From my perspective view, the statement is true and as a matter of fact, I agree that best and more convenient way to travel is having a tour guide.
One of the reason that coming to my mind at the first place is supports and helps which comes from tour leader. Tour leader has lot of experiences about the location that we decided to visit. He/She can support us for various subject like understanding Culture, language and food. For example, I have been in Russia, however, without tour guide we could not even order food. Thus, I think it is better to travel with tour guide.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is that travel is often time limited procedure. It is better to have a tour leader to be able to visit most of the places in a limited time. Without guidance we can lost and waste our time to find a places. For instance, One of my friend travel to france and he lost the way to go to airport, as a result he lost the airplane. I believe, it is worth to have a tour guide and do not waste our time.
To sum up, although many sightless people disagree with the statement, taking all the consideration and factor which I explained, not only tour guide can support us in a different ways, but also, he/she can save us time and money and it is better to travel with tour leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...a limited time. Without guidance we can lost and waste our time to find a places. Fo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a place' or simply 'places'?
Suggestion: a place; places
... we can lost and waste our time to find a places. For instance, One of my friend travel ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...our guide can support us in a different ways, but also, he/she can save us time and ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, as a matter of fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51147540984 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47888367694 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6716767848 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243834630939 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849058284173 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858475251545 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150087518881 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483250046947 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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