100 years ago thought that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas of life. Nowadays, there is less certainty that is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas are more things needed to be done?
Humans are ideally the only social animal on the Earth who are in possession of the most complex thing called brain, which does wonders in craving out complex theories an think new possibilities. Possessing these abilities humans have marveled in many areas. People think that, a century ago, we were moving at a constant pace in advancement, but now, it looks like in some area we have hit breaks. I will discuss what are the areas we have marveled and what are the ones which still needs our attention.
It is affirmative that we have surpassed heights in many areas. In medical science we have invented many treatments curing high level diseases. Take for an example, diseases like TB, Cholera, Malaria and many more are curable. Many critical body parts like eyes, knee, back are treatable and one can live a comparatively healthy life now. In technology and energy too humans have climbed. Invention of the internet has made the world a smaller place and people are more connected then ever.
Though there are remarkable inventions that have facilitated the humans in their lives there are certain areas which are in much needed attention. The medical science, it has advanced, no doubt, but still the diseases like AIDS, Cancer is not curable, such are in grave need of research. In the field of energy we have made an efficient use of several resources available but that have led to polluting our environment. Much research is needed in finding and implementing the cleaner versions of the energy. Renewable sources of energy are yet to be explored more.
A country should focus now on the unexplored areas which can be beneficial. Further, use of the major inventions until now has led to the serious consequences and there are no real steps in resolving that. countries should together focus on that issue and advance a technology at a good pace in fruitful direction.
To summarize, it is absolutely true that the technological advancement has surpassed new heights in many areas but in certain areas, it needs to be accelerated and in the right direction of-course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Suggestion:
... Malaria and many more are curable. Many critical body parts like eyes, knee, bac...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68513253401 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9258017596 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4736842105 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144532232786 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439675571231 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448523123611 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804777560226 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456698443669 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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