Admittedly some people sure, punishments have to fixed for every tipe of crime. Yet still in it, others argue crime episode personally and motively to do depend on purpose of the punishment.
discuss about both of this argumentation and then giving your opinion ?
Crime and punishment, each of it has different domain. Whether present empirical evidence that person engaging in a case, they should have taken the punishment to treat their bad habits. Some of society agreed that law implementation can be controlled criminalization rate. Hence, some other debate in how manner giving appropriate punishment for the crime. Several thinking and considering type of the punishment.
Otherwise, some other sure right punishment should be present for each crime. It is truly that criminalization caused by various factors. Thieves, for example, they take other’s stuff as an effect growing up in the awful environment, which forced them to do that. Other case showed, the crime in a pitch for their financially. Nevertheless, they commit not to steal if there is enough saving to support their life.
Some people think that government should have a strict margin of law, it is important to regulate the all of the crime get the same punishment based on their mistake. Nowadays law in a limp condition admittedly stands for some groups, not for all citizens padding which is marginally.
As long as my thought, government should be controlled and evaluate law regulation, likewise in application to avoid bias punishment to all of member of crime. Thus, some group presently get different treatment with many inappropriate consideration, we can see unfair tendency from this example. In summary my assumption said that strict and clear punishment is the best way to applicative for our clean law.
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