Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the
potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
The diversity of flora and fauna is a unique feature of our home planet : the earth.All the different
species are linked in some way or the other through food chain and the other natural cycles, like the carbon cycle etc.
Over the years due to increasing population of humans , we have expanded urban cities and villages , thus
shrinking the habitat for the other species. The human technology expansion has had certain negative impact
on our environment that pushed us to the limit where certain species have become endangered and are facing extinction.
It is thus the responsibility to save those species that may become extinct due to our activities and we should not
impact other species whose numbers dwindle by natural causes so as not to disrupt the nature.
Primary reasons for endangered species is habitat loss. There can be multiple issues which lead to habitat loss for
for a species like pollution , land encroachment etc. Sometimes even introducing new predator for farming benefit
may also reduce the original population of the native species.Even hunting and poaching are possible reasons for decline in animal
population.Thus we should be responsible in our actions and not disrupt the
natural habitat.
The one horned rhino is a prime example of a species that is facing extinction due to human activities.
The horn of the rhino holds medicinal value is Asian countries and hence is hunted extensively .This has led to
a reduced number of this species. We should help preserve and put checks on hunting of the same.
On the other hand if the potential extinction of a species is not due to human activities then we should not
play with the nature's delicate balance. Some species may not have evolved to survive the new bacteria and
slowly be facing extinction. As we can see that environment keeps changing and is a dynamic habitat that
supports a myraid of species , if a species is not able to sustain , we should not make artificial efforts to preserve .
because every animal has a specifc place in the food chain. Simply artificially adding can disturb this balance
and may have a negative impact on the food chain adversely affecting other species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07751937984 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68825341701 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490956072351 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5919323875 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8125 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2776527827 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111469630699 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131173146745 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992820985583 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113656941756 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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