Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?
I am analyzing this topic of decreasing in wildlife population by using my everyday observation and experience. I am not surprising to see that people think that wildlife population has immensely decreased in last few decades. The main causes of this diminution are deforestation and urbanization. Let us take a more detailed look at the reasons of shrinkage in wildlife Inhabitants.
For a start, deforestation is one of the reason to worry of affecting the wildlife population. Deforestation occurs due to increase in human population. Globalization is playing a vital role in reducing the wildlife population. In addition to that, people lived in past about 50 years back were more careful about the wildlife than people live in present era where urbanization is mostly preferred.
This is combine efforts of the whole world to initiate in protection of the wildlife. For example, the concept of less paper environment should be introduced. Technology must be promoted at the least. In addition to that the global warming idea must take seriously. For instance, protection of green environment should be our priority. Apart from that population need to be controlled by giving the concept of exiling of wildlife inhabitants.
After grasping a complete picture and enlighten the pros and cons of the above topic this is the duty of the people that they should realize their responsibilities towards protection of wildlife and must act in such a way that their existence would not harm in anyway. Nevertheless, government also has the responsibility to change her policies regarding the wildlife inhabitants that eventually affect the world slowly and gradually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... everyday observation and experience. I am not surprising to see that people think that wildlife ...
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...ept of exiling of wildlife inhabitants. After grasping a complete picture and en...
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...way that their existence would not harm in anyway. Nevertheless, government also has the ...
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Suggestion:
...affect the world slowly and gradually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17773941158 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7770695068 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167500499843 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526605140638 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045262850986 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976655372285 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307355830976 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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