Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Undoubtedly, the community in which we live have a great influence on our lives since it forms and modifies most of our behaviors and affect our attitudes to different issues. So it's so important to devote enough time to enhance it. Although some people adamantly claim that, in current years, youngsters spend less time to do so, other take an opposite point of view. Personally, I believe that, now, teenagers are more informed about thier community compared to the past and as well as they help to improve their society more. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, by the advent of the Internet and spreading communicational devices, now people can inform each other easier when they find a problem in their community. By doing so, the number of people who help to solve the problem would increase instantly. As most of the young people have their own smartphones now, they could help their community more than teenagers could do in the past since, at that time, young people were engaged a myriad of tasks and had no spare time to search for the problems to help their community. For example, when my uncle talks about his life when he was young, as I perceived, he was always dealing with a lot of personal problems and he was forced to work from early morning to late night. So he wasn't aware of his community and the changes in his town, like poor people, uneducated kids, burglars, regional conflicts and so on. As he gets older, he decided to change the situation so he tried to increase the awareness of the people living in his town. He did this affair when he was forty but he could make a change in perspective of young people.
Second, as young people are more educated now, they felt more concerned about their society and could do more efficient duties. For example, I can remember when I was fourteen, my mom took me to a field to do voluntary farming and help poor people to gain their required food which was compulsory for being alive. There saw a few young people who were corporating in that work. After that, I attended in a plenty of such events including social, cultural and educational affairs. Now, after sixteen years, I can assert that the number of young people is definitely increasing throughout the years. For instance, last week when I wanted to trigger a free educational program for little kids who hadn't the opportunity to go to school, all the volunteers were under twenty years old and I felt so happy when I saw those young persons are concerned enough about their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64332603939 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47857773452 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527352297593 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1671712564 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226830979855 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074730953796 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662158821907 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15477211233 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240406040254 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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