Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Give reasons to support your answer.
It is undeniable that humans are social beings because they born and grow up in the family; then they enter the society and form their own relationships outside the family. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, although people sometimes want to be alone, they often tend to spend time with their friends (companions) for a great number of reasons, three of which that is having fun with them, sharing knowledge and experience, and getting help on important decisions are the most conspicuous ones.
First of all, nowadays people are isolated and depressed because of their life and work problem. So in order to getting rid of these problems, they have to enjoy their little opportunity. Being with friends and having fun with them is one of the best hobbies of people. They can have a different entertainment with each other, such as a calmly walking on the beach, having party ,and going on a vacation trip, to name but a few. Although these activities can be time-consuming, they are worth doing, as they not only create unforgettable memories in our lives but also refresh our mind, and keep our spirits up.
Everybody, during his or her life, due to being in a different situation, experience a variety of subjects and problems. People can share these experience with each other by being in group of friends. Particularly, in group of university friends that most of people are in a same scientific level, interesting and instructive discussion take place. As a personal experience, during my master degree studies, I had to live in dormitory and with people who are now my best friends. In this period, many discussion in a different topics was took place, in dorm. Providing a various opinion from different people changed my thought about many subjects, and increased my knowledge in some cases.
Sometimes people are placed in a position where they must take an important decision that can influence their future and path of life. Arbitrary decision in this situation can be wrong, so it is very necessary to consult with different people. Friends are the most important people that we can consult with them due to their sympathy and also knowing about us.
To sum up, although everybody needs some moments to be relaxed on his or her own, being with friends helps us to keep our spirits up, enjoy their experience and increase our knowledge, and consult with them in important situation of our life. According to these, I strongly believe that friends are the most important property of every one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...almly walking on the beach, having party ,and going on a vacation trip, to name bu...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ly, in group of university friends that most of people are in a same scientific level, interes...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun discussion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many discussions'.
Suggestion: many discussions
...re now my best friends. In this period, many discussion in a different topics was took place, i...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'topic'?
Suggestion: topic
... period, many discussion in a different topics was took place, in dorm. Providing a va...
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Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ny discussion in a different topics was took place, in dorm. Providing a various opi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, as to, such as, first of all, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89227166276 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67217322378 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512880562061 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.458331738 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.055555556 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253248835417 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082119886275 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650076814501 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151485765144 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313919220003 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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