TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task
The essay states that there are some employees who are willing to get paid less in order to work four days a week and it claims that offering the employees to do so will benefit the companies, employees and the economy as a whole. The professor refutes that by saying that four-day work option will not benefit the economy and won’t increase the profits of the individual companies and will decrease the quality of lives of the employees.
First the professor states that if the companies offer the option of four-day work, they need to spend more. Because hiring new workers will cost a lot of money for their training, health insurance and they need more office space and possibly more computers for the new employees.
Second, the lecture opposes the text by saying that four-day work option may raise expectations. As discussed before hiring new staff is costly, so this may lead the companies to ask their employees to overwork or expecting their employees to do the same amount of work in four days instead of five. And this will affect the employees and the company in a bad way.
Third, the lecture states that the option of four-day work may have risks and generally will reduce the quality of lives of the employees. Because the companies tend to keep their full time employees in economic crises and this may result a low stability of job for four-day workers, also it may cause difficulty for them to advance and get promoted in their job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ll affect the employees and the company in a bad way. Third, the lecture states that the ...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ecause the companies tend to keep their full time employees in economic crises and this m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74901960784 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39390485798 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486274509804 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8140911526 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469059665474 0.272083759551 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212313476558 0.0996497079465 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685620187373 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302830317321 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478256944264 0.0443174109184 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.0289183223 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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