As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree
The idea that, the responsibility of businessman in their business is not only creating profit but also leaving the positive impact to society. I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, profit is always the top priority for each company which is the condition for its exist and development. No matter how long the company have established, if the company can’t make money to maintain daily operation, it will broke down soon. The investors tend to take their money back as soon as they saw that the company is dying gradually because of a significant decresase in the amount of money that they receive from their customers.Futhermore, profit from business is a sign of economic development. Therefore, businessman set making money as one of the most important targets. This is a basic knowledge in market.
On the other hand, businessman have to ensure their responsibility with society. Firstly, almost business operation effect considerably to our environment. For example, rabbish and poission from manufacturing plastic cause either water pollution or air pollution. This impact directly to the health and future of human. Secondly, some people sale a prohibit product as heroin, guns, weapons which destroy a normal life and brings big damage in term of national economic.Although this business operation can make a variety of money, it is still banned.
In conclusion, the businessman who take their responsibility for their own business operation, need to have a caution consideration in their strategies about not only the profit it may bring but also the positive and negative effection to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26538461538 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14317848776 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6276302785 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168876680977 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557587436225 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402951038967 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104034767806 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151207292603 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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