Some people think that science is bone for us while others think that it is bane for human beings. Discuss both sides.
Science has brought many benefits to human kind therefore people believe that it is core for human life and society but few people think that it is of no use and disadvantages are also palpable. I shall explain both sides of arguments in essay.
People who consider science as non-useful for human life have some valid points. Firstly, though science has helped us to overcome the challenges of life, it generated so many problems for humans. Nowadays it is considered that almost every disease is curable but still people die even after advanced treatment. For example, my brother was diagnosed with heart attack problem and while getting treatment, his kidney affected owing to die used in surgery. Secondly, science divided the world and causes conflict among the nations. It is considered that nations who got developed science try to show supremacy with other countries and engage in altercation and eventually in war sometimes.
However, science not only extended the human life but also ease the life for everyone on this planet. Medical science helped the humans to live longer and healthy as it change the metabolism in body which make the people active and give longevity in life. For instance, mortality rate for children worldwide reduced drastically, particularly in underdeveloped nations. Another benefit of science is development of robots which take the all cumbersome tasks of human and compete it efficiently and saves human from physical injuries.
To conclude, while there are many advantages of science, unwise use of science brought havoc to human being and destroy life in a city or country as world has witnessed this in many wars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13284132841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63184234649 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5118152738 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317627204073 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106121590205 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662543302309 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183718759176 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670139890175 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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