Many people complain about commercial advertisement and their influence on children. Should it be controlled by the government? What are the possible effects on children?
Advertisement plays a paramount role to promote and showcase any product to consumers. Presently, some masses ponder that trend of mushrooming number of advertisements are directing at young generation. Here, I would like to discuss its impact and possible solutions of this phenomenon.
There are manifold points to shore up its darker side. Firstly, television adverts have crucial impacts on the eating habits and personalities of children. To elaborate, in this modern era, due to mass commercial of junk foods as delicious and spicy meals, children tend to consume and relish unhygienic stuff. Thus, this trend of unhealthy diets can lead to obesity and heart related diseases. Additionally, the promotions of unhealthy products such as liquor or tobaccos through adverts contaminate juvenile mind to large extent.
On the contrary, commercials become a useful marketing tool for numerous companies that can help them to raise awareness among people about latest products. Therefore, up surging sales of companies able to boost the economic value of any nation. Finally, adverts also help to uplift the living standard of people.
Numerous measures can be mention to tackle this issue. To begin, government should control the information on each advertisements is the most effective way to solve such problems. Concretely, the government should impose the law that can reduce the unhealthy information on promotions on TV.
To recapitulate, the negative influence of commercials on children become extremely worrying concern so these adverts must be limited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.575 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97909382195 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1765960495 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224879245161 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572086698781 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595679062157 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109962455001 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539633864731 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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