Pros and Cons of extreme/adventure sports.
In these days, there is no denying reality that extreme sports are becoming a prevalence. While many people believe that extreme sports brings about positive impacts to people’s live, others feel that the opposite is also correct. This essay offers some insights on both the merits and demerits of the phenomenon.
Perhaps the greatest benefit people can enjoy from doing extreme sports is the sense of satisfaction that it brings about. As a matter of fact, if a person desires to partake in an extreme sport at their own risk, no one could stop them. This is true especially when it comes to the points that it is human’s right and freedom to do what they wish as long as it is legal. Another advantage of extreme sport is that it improves problem solving and decision making skills because in case of emergency, one must be able to act quickly to save their own life.
Nonetheless, like two sides of a same coins, extreme sports also create many problems. The most obvious negative impact is the life of the players. This is due to the fact that extreme sports involve high level of risk and only one mistake such as equipment malfuncion or failure can jeopardize players’ life. Further, if people become handicapped as a result of extreme sports, they would become a burden to their family and the society because extra medical welfare shall be allocated for them.
In conclusion, it is clear that while extreme sports allow people to enjoy many benefits, they also bring upon a number of drawbacks to others’ live and the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nonetheless, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84701492537 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52577214924 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0699775451 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127726335178 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049144765811 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317201892919 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820948138747 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024602659549 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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