In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
In this age of technological advancements, many technologies are developing every day, day in and day out, with no end in sight. Although technologies are regarded as thoroughly both positive and constructive by many individuals, there are a number of people hold an opposite view. I am inclined to strongly believe that one of the most important developments can be considered as computers.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why I choose computer and technology as the most vital developments. First and foremost is that they can provide individuals with comfort. Secondly, it is occasionally argued that saving time is attributed to fact that computers can perform difficult tasks swiftly. From my personal experience, when I want to shop something, I use the internet technology. Consequently, it is quite clear that people feel easy by computers.
However, there is no doubt that computers can provide individuals with various negative outcomes. Despite this possibility, it is highly claimed that poor eyesight is related to using computers for a long period of time by users. By way of example, a recent academic research conducted by Oxford university researchers in 2012 has shown that obesity is negatively correlated to sitting a long time infront of screens. thus, it is quite conspicuous that computers can lead to illnesses.
To put it in a nutshell, while there are persuasive arguments on both sides, I am of the opinion that the benefits of computers far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s related to using computers for a long period of time by users. By way of example, a recent a...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...sitting a long time infront of screens. thus, it is quite conspicuous that computers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14239063593 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608163265306 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5298024749 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0602762958417 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0221982514713 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03449345993 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328639011172 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348937351034 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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