People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your opinion.
It is common proverb that looks are deceptive and looks can be changed by different style of clothing. Since ancient times, people wear types of clothing suited to events, occasion and social norms. It is also observed that people behavior changes up-to some extent depending on attires they wear. I am of the opinion that people act in distinctive manner and that has direct correlation with style of dressing.
To begin with, appearances drive the people behavior towards the person and there is no denial that clothes contribute in making the person’s appearance. People treat the others based on the looks and image they get from dress and try to perceive the personality of the person. Consequently, behavior gets changed based on the responses from other people. For example, my uncle who is renowned doctor wear the proper sports suit in the morning session in stadium and most of the people consider him as a sports person and easily mistaken. Even my uncle behaves like an active sports person and forgets that he is doctor as well by profession.
Secondly, society also have some clothing norms related to different events such as wedding, deaths and other ceremonies and expect people to behave in accordance with situation. This means that people actions are also tied with attire they expected to wear at occasions. For instance, on death occasions in India, people generally wear the white dress and remain quiet and sober, while on wedding ceremony, people do not wear the clothing particularly white and remain to be cheerful and joyful. In addition, some professions have strict dress code which people follow religiously and do not disobey the traits attached to that profession while on duty.
In conclusion, while types of dress help to form the different appearances of individuals, it also changes the behavior and actions of the individuals time to time based on the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59942819846 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6044956491 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256901233087 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859257409562 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436061571632 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148315990976 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710199985784 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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