Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?
Illegal activities like robbery, murders are the significant problems which faced by society in this era. After providing a careful analysis of why youth are encouraged to participate in domestic violence, based on that, I can suggest number of ways to resolve this issue.
There are various reasons to raise the violence, and first one is unemployment, as many young graduates restore to looting and stealing valuable items to meet their daily needs. At the same time lack of opportunities to survive is another great cause of frustration among young people, for instance, Somalia job market is dull, so most of Somalian's are encouraged to commit crimes. The lack of parental supervision is leading to the deterioration of morals and values and this could be one of the reason for increasing violence.
On the positive side, there are options available to fix this issue. To begin with creating employment opportunities will offer a financial and mental stability, thus resulting in lesser number of individuals resorting to criminal activities. Secondly, having good family bonding and providing a friendly atmosphere for the children by loving, caring for and supporting them is pretty much required for the young generations.. Thirdly it's our social responsibility to create awareness and importance of education, ethical values as they not only help to generate more opportunities but also minimise illegal activities.
After analyzing all the points I can say that , we must be responsible for this phenomenon and with restoring to the appropriate steps can bring the crime rate among young to a much lower level.
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- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?: Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions? 11
- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions? 11
- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29343629344 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95771731509 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65250965251 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3574660732 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.052959153859 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017947072097 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230427893114 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324115563764 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220708230241 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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