To understand the most important characteristics of society, one must study its major cities
To understand the most important characteristics of society, one must study its major cities
Each and every society has its own feathers depanding upon comprised of what kind of human beings live there; it has is’s own identity on different aspects such as culture,custom, geography e.t.c. major cities are the part of society which is the harbinger of it so, I am consonat with this statement. Because people from different place live there, comprised of varity of culture and most of educated people.
first of all, major cites are the place where every kind of facilities are availabe. Moreover, human beings are also in search of this kind of facilities such education,health, employment and so on. People from different parts of the country wish saty on such place where every kind of facilities are availabe. Every Human being has their own desires so to fulfil this people wants live in major cities. Each and every people has their own identity which they share with their friends. For eaxample, kathmandu is the major cities of neplai society and most of people stay here due to chich it’s population is more than other cities. Most of people in there educated as well as job holder. So it this is the most important characteristic which people must know in order to understand the anout the society.
Secondly, people are searching for the place where they can live a happy life and major cities are the centre of point for their wishes. So people from different parts having their own cultural identity live here. As nepal is comprised of varity of culture, language cast and so on. For an instance, people in kathmandu speak nepali language which is another characteristic of the major cities. To know about this characteristics one must study of the cites.
Thirdly, learning is another part of the human beings for which they have go the chool,college and unviersity. Most of the education institution are in the major cities. So most of the people in the cities are educated. As this cities is known for the educated people staying place and if someone came and visit this place they will about it. Because the educated people can communicate with the guest from other country knows that people in kathmandu are educated. So this is another characteristic of the cities. This must be known by the people in order to understand about the characteristic of the society.
In recapitultion, as we know major cities are the part of the society due to which society can’t be understood. So every people must study about the major cities in order to know the characteristics of the society. Major cities are the centre place for the people as highly educated people live their, availabilty of employment and it is comprised of various culture with the different background.
- a nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 58
- a nation should require all of its students to study the national curriculum until they enter college 60
- To understand the most important characteristics of society, one must study its major cities 50
- to understand the most important characteristics of the society one must study its major cities 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...society, one must study its major cities Each and every society has its own feath...
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...ity on different aspects such as culture,custom, geography e.t.c. major cities are the ...
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...culture and most of educated people. first of all, major cites are the place where...
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...f this kind of facilities such education,health, employment and so on. People from diff...
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...y kind of facilities are availabe. Every Human being has their own desires so to ...
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...eing has their own desires so to fulfil this people wants live in major cities. Each...
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... the major cities of neplai society and most of people stay here due to chich it's popula...
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...s population is more than other cities. Most of people in there educated as well as job holder...
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...n cultural identity live here. As nepal is comprised of varity of culture, language cast and so...
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...of the human beings for which they have go the chool,college and unviersity. Most ...
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... beings for which they have go the chool,college and unviersity. Most of the education i...
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...nd visit this place they will about it. Because the educated people can communicate wit...
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...their, availabilty of employment and it is comprised of various culture with the different back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95137420719 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74139777624 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.350951374207 0.4932671777 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.9440946661 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.68 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.92 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.83258426966 393% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311610012375 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110020491833 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122343542175 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306828407185 0.150359130593 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.313149324864 0.0667264976115 469% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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