Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, there are two ways to travel as an independent travelers, who had to plan their own itineraries and everything, conversely, we can go to the travel agency and book a package tour or even an all inclusive holiday, in which the price includes flights, transfer, food, and accommodation. I select the travelling with a group in a tour for the following reasons.
First, thanks to the modern transportation agency, people have become more adventurous in their choice of holiday destinations and undertake journy to the most far areas. It is clear that a tour agency try to consider the beautiful destinations to attract the traveler attention. This is a wonderful opportunity to save money and time for the traveler. Let's me explain with an example. I would like to talk about a Esfahan, because it was the one of the strongly memorable travels that I experience it just by a tour. Before that traveler, I have visited the Esfahan before to go with the tour. However, I did'nt know there are absolutely wonderful architectures and handicrafts and many tourist attractions such as 'Siyosepol' and "Imam Square'. I'm grateful for that tour agency that provides me to do sightseeing many picturesque places of Esfahan.
Another reason which is worth mentioning is the student spend more time with our friends by means of a tour. Furthermore, I believe the trael will be more attractive by a tour rather than to travel individually. It is possible to play sport as a group such as football that need about at least twenty two people for playing. Always, traveling presents a exhaustive process as individually while travel using a tour is delightful in every time.
All in all, taking all the reasons which I provided in the previous paragraph bring us to the conclusion that travelling by means of a tour is more attractive and enjoylable not only for visiting the attracted places but also . by doing some delicious activites such a playing team-work sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9667673716 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9620672439 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9543485392 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190819783564 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672715761827 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586017358349 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120970677972 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375442122282 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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