about the following topic:
Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Crime is act which causes and creates disturbing effect in society in terms of loss of property, physical and mental damages. We are witnessing a tremendous rise in no. of criminal incidences which are recurring in today's scenario. Let us try to look what are possible causes/ reasons because of which the criminal Activities are Increasing.
a) With the advancement of technology lot of innovation and use of gadgets & gizimos have helped in increasing the rate.
eg: cell phone (smart phone) > This is a very common tool and over 80% of crimes are using it as there Prime tool.
b) Technology Advancement has helped towards better standard of life but their are these Anti-social elements who use it to create and cause disturbance to the society. We have seen numerous examples of cell Phones bring used in terrorist Activities all across the globe.
c) Use of Internet it is said you get whole lot of Information which can be either used Productively or destructively. When I say that it has helped the Anti social elements is Passing Information, sharing of Plans viz skype call, email, and other social Networking tools such as Facebook, twiiter, Whats App etc.
d) Another Important factor which is responsible for rise is Television. We can observe that or TV serials sre aired which actually show the criminal Activities here the objective of TV serial is to educate and highlight etc. cases to viewers but most of times it gives innovative ideas and tricks which Anti social elements Pick up very easily and implement.
To Prevent the Rise in criminal Activity one needs to adapt/ implement following:
a) Every citizen should be made aware of the hazards/ effects of criminal Activity.
b) They should be alert & be actively innvolved with social discussions when the Area so that they are aware and updated about the current crime rates.
c) Citizens should help Police and other government bodies by Providing any suspicious Activity/ thing/ object which they observe.
d) Citizens should have a mindset of helping each other.
e) Strict law & Penalities to be implemented by government so that these Anti-social elements will try to think about it before trying to commit the Activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05464480874 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74857822334 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.926160549 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172369432017 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528738782216 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374449477111 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640247132531 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389733194991 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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